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    submitted 07 March 2006 @ 15:36
    edited 07 March 2006 @ 15:40

A Television Commentary

Written by Jack Morris
Rating: Superb! (5) (5 rating, 16 ratings)

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Here is the stick peoples rancid utopia, an excesive slaughter of already/dead animals,
 an acidic, corrosive mental picture of per-turbed butter-flies.

Here is the flickering of the innate static on the "tee vee" screen,
 bellow-ing and prow-ling, among the grey ponderings. 
Titter-tatting, like atom bomb rain drops,
  on the stained beige floor,

The reception has gone out on the tee vee.

So someone gets up and franitc-ally slaps it's side, turns the knobs with thick clunks,
 twists dials in-between swears,
  and bright flashes of light, burst like machine gun fire...
   as we all feel the need. the tantalizing, purgifying need,
 to run, to escape...
    to pull the plug, the plug of power, pull it straight out of the wall.

To surcumb the static,
 with great herds of flowing brown hair falling out of playful fingers,
 to breath sweet fresh air, atop some great granite cliff, without heavy wheezing.

Yet truly such things are as among the fraudlent pressing of wildflowers, 
 beneath toes in category, warmed hopes dear to hearts seeking a destination,
 something more... something real,
  something that just might slice up the feet and hands...
   of those reaching for it.

Like the chaos of static on the t.v. screen, beating in formula to those hearts,
 wild-ly fluc-tuat-ing, in great fever-ed tossings,
  safe-ly and vouy-er-ist-ic-lee living otha people's lives,
 laid about couch/troughs as cattle in feed yards,
  chewing on the stick people's rancid utopia.

And, never/never, thinking for themselves,
 or having any faith in their own opinions.



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