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    submitted 24 December 2005 @ 03:44

Crimson Nimbus

Written by Jack Morris
Rating: Superb! (5) (5 rating, 25 ratings)

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She of the Crimson Nimbus in the pale orange twilight,
she is mine...
a possession of memory and soul.

I hold her in my chest,
hold her in a strong box...
and a passing wind bore the key.

Awakened, let out... pressed out,
the derelict thoughts into small heart shaped candy reminders.

And.. the years, broken back ages have passed,
bruising with chauvanistic barks... the fabrics,
till the scientific result bears upon it's neon fixtures...
the caption... "Creature from the Stone Lagoon".

Rock weathered by periods of time with erosion.
Aye yes, I have become rock,
and the fresh produce of last year,
and the junk food candy of wind,
metamorphisized... is a softening agent.

I am rock made into wet mud,
youthened after seeing the figment of memory,
of her lovely soft face,
the smiling eyes of twilight winds,
those scratches of nostalgia...
ghosting thru my meat and bone.

Yet somehow this feels an intrustion,
like a stranger in old company gatherings,
a tap dance over the grave.

This old lore of yester-year,
forging upon my countenance... a visage,
a dark face of hope, pain, anger and lonlieness.

All mixed in some ancient cauldron of the human condition.

Yet still I must admit,
she of the crimson nimbus...
in the pale orange twillight.

She is still mine.



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