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    submitted 09 December 2005 @ 18:34

Music Fans

Written by Jack Morris

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They turned the music on so they wouldnt have to talk,
because they were lonely and the tongues,
of guitars, bass and drum,
seemed to mimic how they felt.

These were the drug addicts,
feeding off the notes, of someone elses airs.

The vouyers of language,
pounding their fists into packed concrete.

I turned the music off,
so we could get to know each other better,
because I was lonely,
and I wanted to hear their tongues,
tasting the world behind their eyes.

Music was everything to them,
their shield against the monsterous truths,
prescription drug placebo to help them forget,
what ailed them.

I cherished the silence,
the little sounds they never heard,
the grumblings of their stomachs,
and the breath escaping their lungs.

With their music on,
I could not hear the whispers of hope,
focus the energies within and without,
to forge a link with bravery.

I understood their needs,
yet the dose was too high,
their drugs were just that,
drugs to keep out the world.
and I wished I could take away the tunes,
chain them to undeveloped feilds,
force them to hear the silence...
but they wouldn't listen,
and I knew that their disease,
would gain in it's cancerous growth,
they would become mindless,
incapable of thinking for themselves.



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